Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Clinging With Touch Up

6x6 Clinging needed some attention and advise.  I was able to take a second look and apply many of my comments from yesterday to finishing up this piece.  It is working much better now.  I could noodle this to death, but it is time to move on.  Thanks so much to all of you who gave constructive criticism on line and off.

Today     vs.    Yesterday

4 comments:

Dana Cooper said...

It definitely reads now Dori, great job!
Fun seeing you today too!

Virginia Floyd said...

Aaaah. That did it. Great job!

Marian Fortunati said...

WOW!!!!

Angela said...

This is so nice. Love the apple and the vase.