I made a few changes based on some suggestions I got. (above)
I was out in Irvine park on the first real good day in a while. It was clear and not windy and not too cold. This is a north facing view. In an attempt to push myself I decided to work bigger. I was not able to finish on site and worked on it more at home. I had trouble with values and then color and in working on it at home I feel I lost that freshness of working fast on site. I don't believe that it is finished and I really don't know what to do. It just does not have the excitement that I felt getting out and painting.