Monday, May 25, 2009

Clouds?




Okay, so I didn't put it away.  I warmed up the forground a tad.  I thought the sky was too dominate to be so plain.  So what do you think?  Clouds or no clouds?  

11 comments:

Sheila said...

I always love clouds. My vote is for clouds.

Karen said...

Yes definitely, clouds!! They draw my eye into the scene more, and they glow, too.

Dana Cooper Fine Art said...

Clouds...they point the viewer towards the building...great job!

Kim VanDerhoek said...

Yes, clouds! Adding them near your focal point directs me to the area of interest. When they weren't there my eye stayed on the buildings and all the horizontal lines, the organic shape of the clouds breaks that up and adds another level. Good decision and beautiful!

Kathleen Harrington Paints said...

Clouds! Please! Scene is much more dramatic, moody, interesting with them.

Deborah said...

Definitely clouds! I like this much better.

Rob Carey said...

I like your new image much better- yes, the clouds are very important here, and the warmer colors throughout seem to add so much as well. Love your blog.

Gary Keimig said...

Yep. Clouds but not overbearing to the piece. From what I see you have started is pretty good. Just bring them out slightly more. Keep them kinda hazy so they wont compete with the rest of the picture.
Does look good with that warmer tone to it.

Dewberry Fine Art said...

Thanks to everyone. Clouds are the overwhelming winner.

Joan Sicignano Artist said...

I love your work. I just posted a thumbnail on my blog. I hope it is ok with you.

Best Regards
Joan

Paintings by Irit Bourla said...

Yes to the clouds.
I like the feeling in this piece.